Meaning

This is what happen when im bord.

Without darkness there is no light
Without light there is no joy
Without joy there is no pain
Without pain there is no happyness
Without happyness there is no love
and without love there is no meaning.

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

repetitive but nevertheless accurate

[Legion]

Not to sound mean here and I understand that you were bored, but you haven't said anything here that hasn't been said thousands of times before. If you choose to repeat something quite typical, the best bet is to present it in a new and unique fashion. Not easy to do, but can be done. You want it to stand out and make the reader remember it even days after reading it. Give me a "heads up" and I'll re-review it for you if you rewrite it. Kudos and keep on writing.

[Elliot Kyron]

What are you talking about? It's gorgeous. And it's undeniably true. I love it.