Stars

A friend and I live on the same street. Sometimes when one of us is staying at the others, and we didn't bring clothes. We would walk slowly up or down the street doing exactly this.

My friend and I tonight
Looking at the stars so bright
Walking up and down the street
Naming constellations that we see
A good time at hand
Though it's never planned
Repeated every time
Only looking for one line
It sits across three stars
And we've always called it ours...

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[munkiC munkiDU]

that's really sweet. ^.^ I like the simplistic rhyme scheme you used. It gives it a nice gentle pace, so you can imagine yourself outside in the dark when it's all peaeful and quiet... good write :D