-Pseudo You-

Underneath your pretentious smile

lives a prominent throbbing pain

Sleeping with struggles

Dreaming suspicions

Friends with suffering

Battling contentment

Often Tormented by memories,

Drunk on agony

Feeding on anger

Inhaling answers

Emitting questions

Breathing solutions

Being confusion.

Underneath all your troubles

There beats a burdened heart..

Grieving, Ailing,

Sickened and Afflicted with Love

Still.

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

Gorgeous. Behind the pretentious surface that we show to everyone lies a heart in agony. I really enjoyed the one. Every line compliments the next and keeps me engaged.

[Kaity Fisher]

This is deep. One of the best poems I've read! Keep up this work! Please! This was flawless. Just absolutely beautiful.

[-GB-]

Awh! That is the best encouragement! Thank you so much Kaity..do have a look at my other poems as eell. :) love.