-Black n White-

Surrounded by colors of life

Leaving behind shades of blue

Searching for the zest of light

Darkness persuades me

Mutating into misty grey

Finally invisible out of sight.

 

Tempting rosette follows me

Hiding around running from hue

Arrogant crimson tears abide

Dreams delude me

Hanging between truths and lies

Choosing between must and might.

 

Giving away vision of sky

Thoughts are fading, empty view

Blank my soul shines so bright

My state amuses me..

Rainbows fading, colors have died

Finding pulse in Black and White.

Reviews

[Rasi Rana]

In first line you wrote "Surrounded by colors of life"but the poem is filled with only dark colors. In the whole poem you are down., why? According to first line I expected some bright colors in it, but I can say its a dark poem, right?
by d way poem is good but ....

[-GB-]

The first line indicates that there was once colors in life and the whole poem shows my gradual mutation towards black n white

[Rasi Rana]

ok. got it)