Our Election...

Our Election...

A Poem by Nicky Sarti

For two weeks I helped him.
Worked with him to the right result.
A win and nothing else would do.
It was hard, but totally worth it…
We’d meet for coffee first.
Then spend time delivering and canvassing.
We would the head off for a drink or dinner.
Getting close, as close as friends could get.
And then I went and made a move, one I had longed to make.
I thought I had got it wrong, thought I had made a mistake.
But maybe I was wrong, maybe all was not lost.
It took time, a long time.
But we got there, the night before the election was the night.
A beautiful meal, a good sleep and more help with smiles all the way.
Until I got the message that sent chills up my spine.
He thought he would lose, sure he would not win.
My stomach in knots and full of nerves. 
The count was a next and exciting experience for me.
But my fear was in full flow, jinx Nicky might strike again; or would this be 3rd time lucky?
Taking hold of his hand for comfort as we watched events play out.
Running into his arms as he won ~ the most jubilant of feelings!
Feeling his kiss, once or twice; so calm and so open.
Celebrations back at my home. 
Champagne to congratulate a well-earned victory.
Another parting kiss, hopefully not my last either… 
Yes, that was my election!

© 2013 Nicky Sarti


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Golly, what a tale. How exciting to experience it, to write about it and then to let us read it. I really enjoyed it, Nicky. I don't know what this line means, though: "We would the head off for a drink or dinner." It doesn't seem to make sense to me. Is the word "the" superfluous or is it a typo and should read "then"? A very minor thing in an otherwise lovely read. Mike.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicky Sarti

11 Years Ago

Thanks for spotting that Mike, yep typo it was!
And thanks for commenting x



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Well told the tale of parallel excitement. The election and your desire.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicky Sarti

11 Years Ago

Well it was actually written with a comment of Mike's in mind - he said after one poem that he was c.. read more
Golly, what a tale. How exciting to experience it, to write about it and then to let us read it. I really enjoyed it, Nicky. I don't know what this line means, though: "We would the head off for a drink or dinner." It doesn't seem to make sense to me. Is the word "the" superfluous or is it a typo and should read "then"? A very minor thing in an otherwise lovely read. Mike.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicky Sarti

11 Years Ago

Thanks for spotting that Mike, yep typo it was!
And thanks for commenting x

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