Jupiter and Venus.

Last of seven written for my writing group. Not the best or most on topic one; but best I can do right at this moment... I will come back to it one time and tweak.

I know it should be Mars and Venus, but when have I ever done anything according to plan?

You should know me by now, nothing is ever simple.

If it can be done the easy or hard way, I always go for the hardest route!

Why fall for the available guys, when you can pick the guy who is always going to cause you heartache?

Why keep your mouth shut when you can open it and get in trouble?

One day, I keep telling myself; one day I will learn.

That day never seems to come.

And here I go again; I must want my head testing…

Everything about him screams “Mars and then some,” but here I go feeling “it” for him.

I am from Jupiter, clearly another planet; compared to all the other Venus beauties out there!

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another very emotive piece from you Nicky. Full of pathos!

[Nicky Sarti]

Thank you kindly.
I am like you (though not as good with words) it helps me get "rid" of it all.