Daydreaming

A force captures my 

Attention, making me

Grin more than ever; 

That smile having 

My heart melting on the floor. 

I want you so much. 

Author's Note

A double senryu.

Inspired by:
Taylor Swift - Today Was A Fairytale / You Belong With Me Cover Medley
by Ahmir (they're AMAZING!). I'm all lovely dovey and mushy because of their cover. ;D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XWolN7Ga8nY

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Man..this poem had my mouth watering. lol.
You captured the dream perfectly.

[JENY]

Wow..
Very truthful acceptance of one’s own
passion..
Loved it…..

[Young Mountain]

Fantastic
Love & Wonder all at once

Nice work :-)

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

there is nothing more to be said....you have said it all....lol

regards
vincent
www.esprit.aegauthorblogs.com
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