Passing By

A short non-romantic sonnet.

Watching the waves form alive, 

They tower over like Big Ben and take a dive, 

Crashing down with an intention to yet again roar up to the sky, 

Making it feel like you want stop by 

And be one with the strong waves.  

Author's Note

This is my first (non-romantic) sonnet. It's for a contest.

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Un-Romantic-Sonnetts/10545/

I went in this rhyme scheme:
A
A
B
B
C

Reviews

[BeccaB]

wow thats well writen and very nice ^_^ loving the flow of it ^_^

[JENY]

Fantastic…….
Beauty of brevity…
I liked it……

[Sasha]

I like the way you expressed this - especially in the second line. It created a very vivid picture.

[Mauricio Montoya]

not bad, nice work

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a power in the ocean, the flow and roar, and you capture this very well with your imagery. Excellent form and expression!

[deeps]

I thought this was an amazing wirte.
I like the layout of this as well.
Very well written