Going with Love

You 

And I 
Will pay with 

Our smiles on 

This wonderful day, laughing and crying

With happiness,staring at each other 

With the future 

In our eyes 

And much 
Love. 

Author's Note

Inspired by You and I by Ingrid Michaelson. :]


STRUCTURE OF TETRACTYS:

Twenty Syllables Per Verse

line 1 ~ One
line 2 ~ Two
line 3 ~ Three
line 4 ~ Four
line 5 ~ Ten

Reviews

[melissa]

very sweet:)

[TeenRomance2]

Very sweet! I liked it, and I like that style of writing too. The poem is not only good, it looks good on 'paper'. Kudos! =^-^=

[deeps]

this is a wonderful write

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the tetractys contest!

[Sofia N]

I love it..you're awesome :)..even though is short is very powerful..good job :)

[Soul Magic✯]

wow this is beautifully written. tetracty is one of my fav style of poetry. you did flawless with it. keep up the great work :)

[Wicahpi]

I just adore this form of poetry.
Always a pleasure to read your entries!
This is inspirational. Thank You !