Acceptance

Acceptance is a radiance of yellow sunshine, 

Giving us a sensation of powerful bliss. 

It tastes like sugar plain and 

It feels like a soft, dizzy sensation in my soul, 

Touching our lives with the sounds of acceptance. 

And do you know what that sounds like? 

It sounds like humming birds singing to each other. 

Author's Note

This is for my Strategies for College class. I thought it would be easier than I excepted, but she made us write with what's on the paper; we couldn't completely make it up on our own. We just have to fill in the blanks, and we had to have a color description in the beginning after acceptance is.....

Reviews

[Robyn]

The last line is excellent.
It sounds like humming birds singing to each other.

that makes me smile

this is a warm poem :)

[Starr]

Loveliness... such a beautiful scribe. I like the "fill in the blanks" challenge the teacher assigned. I think I would like to try a few and see if I can bless the page as sweet as you have done here. Very inspirational, feel good poem. Nicely done Hun.