Vanished

A Poem by Nicole Renee

Wish we

Had more time,

Not knowing that

When you would step out of that door, that you

Would disappear like a ghost in mid air,

Leaving me

To say

Why?

© 2010 Nicole Renee

Author's Note

For the Tetractys #4 contest!
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Tetractys-%234/10106/

I was looking through my old poems and I saw "The Time We Owe" and this is what I thought of, being a little based off of a loss of a loved one, but different. You can make your own story out of this one.

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Nancy Lee Shrader

Great use of the Tetracty form. Congrats to you!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wicahpi

Okay, you get to add one more line to this! lol
You need a 10 syllable line to start off the second verse :)
I can feel the excitement of writing these that you simply skipped
it by accident! lol I like it!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago

la Abeja

This is great. Short, but so full of meaning. Thanks for sharing

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Author

Nicole Renee

Anoka, MN

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I usually write poetry and short stories, yet I always come up with good ideas for novels. I did have a long biography on here,but when Charlie deleted everybody's work off of here on Friday the 13th,.. more..