Dancing Fun

My third Tetractys poem!

Why 

Don't we 

Dance until 

The rain dries up

And takes us into a world that we can't 
Recognize and can feel wonderful in. 

So take my hand,
Spin around 

And just 

Stop. 

Author's Note

For the Tetractys #2 contest.
STRUCTURE OF TETRACTYS:

Twenty Syllables Per Verse

line 1 ~ One
line 2 ~ Two
line 3 ~ Three
line 4 ~ Four
line 5 ~ Ten

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Tetractys-%232/9993/

Inspired by:
Why Don't We Do It in the Road in the Across the Universe soundtrack
sung by Dana Fuchs!

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

amazing technique......the spinning sensation is there..thanks Nicole