The Time We Still Owe
A Poem by
Nicole Renee
POV of a Guy; for the Inspired by a Lyric contest.
I still want to see you
In that sweet silhouette
Of a dress, wanting to
Take you into my arms
And say that I will
Always love you
Forever and ever,
Even when our
Time ends right
Now, right here…
At the red light;
At the head
Collision of
A car crash..
I’m sorry;
I didn’t
Want my
Life ending
This way..
But I will
Still love
You for
As long as
I live…
Even as
A ghost
In your
Beautiful
Green
Eyes.
© 2008 Nicole Renee
Author's Note
Did I make it seem like it was at least a POV of a guy?
Also inspired by: I Don't Love You by My Chemical Romance
Reviews
love this... i voted for you in the Flowing Love contest :) 10/10
Posted 14 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I really liked this. I've read alot of poetry on this site and this one will surely stand out.
Posted 16 Years Ago
I really liked this. I've read alot of poetry on this site and this one will surely stand out.
What beautiful and haunting words of such timeless love, the ending was phenomenally touching. Good luck , you got my vote.
Posted 16 Years Ago
What beautiful and haunting words of such timeless love, the ending was phenomenally touching. Good luck , you got my vote.
this is really good! terrific write, idk if it wa an accident but the way the lines become progressively shorter and shorter gives a feeling like your running out of time which really adds to the effect of the poem
Posted 16 Years Ago
this is really good! terrific write, idk if it wa an accident but the way the lines become progressively shorter and shorter gives a feeling like your running out of time which really adds to the effect of the poem
Oh my f*****g God. That was like. Amazing.
(My friend in the background): "I like it. Dude, I like it. Did you tell her I like it? I like it cause...it's...coooool...I like it. Did you tell her? I like it.
I love it. It's perfect.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Oh my fucking God. That was like. Amazing.
(My friend in the background): "I like it. Dude, I like it. Did you tell her I like it? I like it cause...it's...coooool...I like it. Did you tell her? I like it.
I love it. It's perfect. <3
Hmm... yep, that sounds like a guy alright... a really sweet guy. ^^ Nice job with this. It's beautiful. Chock full of words that any woman would want to hear from their one true love. :D
Good luck in that Lyric contest of yours, btw.
Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood
Posted 16 Years Ago
Hmm... yep, that sounds like a guy alright... a really sweet guy. ^^ Nice job with this. It's beautiful. Chock full of words that any woman would want to hear from their one true love. :D
Good luck in that Lyric contest of yours, btw.
Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 12, 2008
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Nicole Renee Anoka, MN
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I usually write poetry and short stories, yet I always come up with good ideas for novels. I did have a long biography on here,but when Charlie deleted everybody's work off of here on Friday the 13th,..
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