Death's Love Note

Story idea.

 

“No one's death comes to pass without making some impression… ”

-Hermann Broch

 

 

Getting into a terrible car accident, Vivian Carrel is on the line between death and being alive. While the Grim Reaper is coming around to collect the dead, he sees Vivian’s soul, being captivated by her beauty an d determination to not die on the string of his collection day. But he doesn’t think what he’s feeling for a human is  regular to a Grim Reaper, so he saves her life, but with a price: to see and touch the walking souls of the living dead, having to help out the tormented souls that died with either sadness or anger in their hearts. At first when Vivian awakes, she thinks that she’s just seeing things and ignores the many people that are now walking amongst her life. But when a little girl asks her to help her find her mother so she could say her final goodbye, Vivian realizes that she can’t do this alone; also befriending a soul by the name of Jacob, who seems to be wanting to help out with Vivian’s job very much….

                Now with Jacob at her side, Vivian goes to find the little girl’s home to have her find her mother, making her wonder in the process about Jacob and his past as well…

Reviews

[DarkAngelWriter]

DO IT! DO IT! DO IT!

[Larissa G.]

It has potential. I think I would have to see its style before I was sold yes or no. It's like "Eragon" - could have been so much better, but it wasn't so I shamefully read the books just to find out what happens. Don't get me wrong, it looks interesting. I look forward to it. :)

[Kiranzia]

Unique idea. Grasped me....you gonna write more of it, right?