My Simple Suicide Part.II

Falling, Falling, Screaming From My Heart

 

On the edge,

I’m slipping off,

Slowly,slowly,slowly…

I want it to get faster.

I bite down on my lip

And wonder if I’m worth

The cause; to be here on Earth,

To be walking amongst myself

With my heart tearing up inside.

So stop me now before I jump;

Jumping into darkness,

Darkness that wouldn’t

Save me in time.

Oh forget it,

I’m already falling…

Falling,falling,falling.

The water is enveloping

Me.. for now and forever…

Goodnight, goodbye.

I’m forever gone.   

Author's Note

I've been thinking about doing another poem based off my first poem and how my aunt's friend must be feeling..she's had suicidal thoughts (it's because of a few things she's going through). I'm not going to say anything because it's personal and I'm not giving out a name.

Experimental poem...read my first poem and you'll get why I did the line breaks the way I did in the poem.

This is a 'sequel' to My Simple Suicide: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Elizabeth_Rose/265787/

Reviews

[Kevon]

good poem, very espressive