Letting Go and Falling Down

Free verse poem?

 

I took a chance and left you standing

For your own good, thinking

That it was the only chance to give to you

Letting you fix up those mistakes from the past.
But I knew that it was a mistake in the first place,

My heart telling me that I should of

Helped you along the road to repair

Your feelings in this epic battle of pain...

Yet I took my bets and let your try to grow

Your own beating wings, making you fail in the process

Because I wasn’t standing by your side

To save you when you fell out of the sky

With those broken wings of yours….

 

Author's Note

Credit: Wasting My Time by Default (and the first line for the poem..that's from their song...) <3

Ignore the line breakage and how rusty my writing is. Lol. XD It's been a while and wanted to see if I still had that 'touch' or not.... so did I didn't I? ^_^

Reviews

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

i like it but it does need a bit of work weeding out the words that don't need to be there, look at it closely you will understand.

[Laura E. Aranda]

wow! excellently penned