Don't Die on Me, Please

Writer's block?

Inspire me please;
I need your help on this piece.

Half my heart has died.

 

Author's Note

I'll just writer down what I really want to say separately since it might be long to say in a Author's Note.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Elizabeth_Rose/276772/ (read for more, if you wanted).

Reviews

[Emily Rose]

Awww what a great way to fight writer's block - by writing! Good choice of font, too. Well done!

[RAWR!]

this had a nice punch to it.

anyway, stemcells could help your halfheart.

[John Stussy]

wow, i'd say you can write well with only half a heart.

[Ralphy]

With that kaleidoscope of yours, why do think the vision that is captivated by that beautiful eye can't see what your mind has already witnessed. Your dreams and thoughts almost mirror each other, and when a speck of light illuminates the mind, whirl that pen.

[Mariana Silva]

That is an impressive and original haiku. I've only read one other poem that was so simple but impressive such as yours.