Little by Little

 

It stings, It hurts,

I can’t stand to bottle up

My feelings like this;

 Why must I stand and

Watch my heart stare

Into an infinite cloud of

Daydreams while my eyes

Watch the rain fall down

One by one, little by little…

It’s only a matter of time

Before I say what I really want to say,

The rain falling one by one, little by little;

Into the street and into the cracks upon the road..

Author's Note

Ignore line breakage, please.

Lol, it's actually raining where I live, by the way... ^_^

Reviews

[Larissa G.]

I agree about more details, I want a clearer idea about what may be going on. :)

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Very good poem!
However, I would use a little more details.
Thanks!

Me Being Me,
Morgan P.