Falling All Over

Falling All Over

A Poem by Nicole Renee
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Girl Number 1's POV in the music video.

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The best thing about tonight

Is that we’re not fighting,

Yet you seem a little edgy

With those sweet words

That you are telling me

On the tip of your tongue,

Fumbling with the camera

That you have in those

Loving hands of yours.

I suddenly get the feeling

That something is wrong as

You’re crawling towards my side

On the other side of the bed,  

Running your hands along the curves

Of my body. I then hear the phone ringing,

Seeing you trample over your own feet
As you reach for the old fashioned phone

That you have besides our bed.

And when I look over my shoulder,

I realize that I can read faces and

I see the mask that you have worn

Around me when I have touched

My hand against your hand,

Our kisses seeming so false now

That I know your troubled truth.

 

And as you’re speaking

To the other line,

I jumped off the bed,

Slipping on my black dress

That I wore for your mother’s

Fifty seventh birthday party

To impress your folks to

Have them tell me that I look pretty

In it with my emerald green eyes.

I know that this is a shock for you

Feeling those steely gray eyes of yours

On my bare back, swearing under your breath

As I’m running out the door

With my suitcase in the other hand.  

 

I can hear those bittersweet words

Yelling at me as I’m running down

The street, calling for a taxi to take me

Home in my disastrous state of mind.

I rip open the door of the yellow taxi door

Out, my head swimming as my tear are flowing down.

Oh how I loved you before, but now you’re just

An old memory to burn onto my heart.

 

© 2008 Nicole Renee


Author's Note

Nicole Renee
I was listening to Secondhand Serenade's Fall For You...
[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FKi125iqnFg]]
---First little part is from the beganning of the song. ;D


--Ignore line breakage.

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This is a good write and it would be my guess that only someone who has lived it could tell it so well. Good job!

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Nicole Renee
Nicole Renee

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