Bernie the Bouncy Bunny

 

Spinning around in circles,

Let the bunny hop and hop

Until it wears out and

Let’s out a silly plop!

Now watch that bunny go

While it goes to stream to pop,pop,pop!;

I know I really love this little gallant bunny of mine!

But now let’s go away and do the hop, hop, hop!

To let the bunny teach its hop, pop, and drop.

Author's Note

Don't ask......lol. I just wrote what came out of my head and into words. XD This doesn't even make all that sense,but it rhymes. O.o' (it was for a contest..)

Reviews

[L.G. Knight]

Let me first say....=( I am sorry....

I love you for wanting to enter my Silly Rhymes contest and I love your work really I do and though this one is cute it is not one of my favorites...

I don't want to say anything bad about your work or discorage you from trying new things I just wanted to say that you should never write a poem for a contest specifically you should always write the poem then find the contest that matches.

This is cute and everything, it just sems more contrived than anything, like it was forced, and poetry shouldn't be forced. Poetry is an expresion of your feelings and those can't be forced...

I love the the bunny angle and I love where I think you were trying to go with this and again I love you for entering my contests without fail... Your an awesome writer I just think you can do better....

Love you girl!

~Frances~

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

hmmm, looks like you are on your way, welcome to the first stages of lunacy. i will be your captain and have been there for sometime. just kidding it works it is unique, shocking, and sweetly short. nicely done!!!!!!! LMAO! : )

[Kristopher L. Bageant]

I like it....Its catchy.... Keep it up.

Kris

[alternative_be]

I just want to get up and dance while reading this. Thanks for making me feel cheerful!