The First Time

..I've ever done a Haiku (in a long long time).

Let the fantasy

Begin inside our bold minds.

Beauty will unfold.

Author's Note

Wow, that was hard. Lol. Especially the last sentence. X"D

Reviews

[Bennett Logan]

That's what I like about haikus. They are what they are. The language you use in this piece is suitable to the poem, so good work. Definately.

[DarkAngelWriter]

Never fail to impress me =)

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I liked it..its short, sweet and to the point..i enjoyed the read..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[lori c]

ah, just where it all truly starts-- in the mind. excellent choice of words.

[Marie]

Very nice.

[Imperfection]

Loved the last line.

Well done.
Keep writing.

[Cassandra]

Good haiku.. they're tough. I like the use of fantasy.. get all your syllables done in one shot :) For someone that hasn't written haiku for awhile I think you did a nice job.

[ah]

u made this look easy to write, amazing write, thanx for posting, keep writing