Can't Let It Go

Can't Let It Go

A Poem by Nicole Renee
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Inspired by Goo Goo Doll's Can't Let It Go.

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Coming towards the end, we can make it to the cliff

And turn around to say good bye.
Nothing can stop us from flying away into the night, Even though

The bars on my cage are caving in on my soul and my heart.

 

Letting the wind lift me upwards towards the sky, I know that
E
verything will be alright when I leave this old life behind me and I
T
oss it to the side like another awful memory.
Now


I
nto the stars and flying over the moon, I'm
T
aking this advantage to the level it can go to,

Not looking down towards the smallness of my eagle eyed view.

G
oing even higher than possible, I see that

my dreams are about to come truer than

A wishing well or a lucky penny, crying
O
ver and over again until I see my favorite star

and rest my head against it until I fall asleep.

© 2008 Nicole Renee


Author's Note

Nicole Renee
It just came to me. XD I hope this didn't totally suck.

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This piece is very vivid it seems to pop off the page. I love messages within a message, excellent work
My favorite part
"Everything will be alright when I leave this old life behind me and I
Toss it to the side like another awful memory. "

thank you for entering my contest

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is fantastic. You paint such a vivid story with lines such as : "The bars on my cage are caving in on my soul and my heart" I love all the imagery and hidden meanings within. A most enjoyable poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 13, 2008
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Nicole Renee
Nicole Renee

Anoka, MN



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I usually write poetry and short stories, yet I always come up with good ideas for novels. I did have a long biography on here,but when Charlie deleted everybody's work off of here on Friday the 13th,.. more..

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