The Intoxication

Inspired by 'At Last' by Billie Holiday.

Freeing me from the darkness
That I used to crawl through with blind eyes,

Your love has freed me from the tunnel,

The hate that I used to be intwinded with.

Your smile has lifted me high above in daydreams,

Those ocean blue eyes making me fall even more

From the height that I've now climbed at.

I hope you never fade away;

Don't be the ghost of my past!

Your kisses make me melt,

The electricity between us

Being as poweful as sweet

Chocolate on the tip of my tongue.

When you hold me or don't hold me,

I feel as though we should be together

In eachaother's arms,

Seeing a future with us together.

My heart is yours for the taking,

And I hope that yours is

Mine for taking too.

 

 

Author's Note

Just something out of the blue. XD

Reviews

[Jacqueline]

Ooh, the title grabbed me and your words had that emotional altering effect. I could feel the bliss and heights a person feels when love is in the air! Loved this.

[PhoeniX]

warm felt and pure. enjoyed the sincerity and truth of the love shared between to souls that found each other. written well

[Steffi]

"Your love has freed me from the tunnel,
The hate that I used to be intwinded with".

[Akaila]

aww this was heartfelt!! i was like how sweet! i like this totally romantic!!! flowed perfectly!! love hehe!
~akaila~

[Isericanormal]

I liked it. It was warm and heart felt. i loved the begining as it flowed more towards the end it lost that certain great effect it had on me.I think because you started off with long descriptive lines and all of a sudden changed them to short not as descriptive lines that didnt give off that hard hit with a book meaning like the begining maybe thats it i dont know thats just me. im not sure but it was still really good!