Ghosts- take the form of shadows Where the ceiling meets the wall Silent- Though I still hear their call I turn the lights off So if they're merely shadows Then they may subside It's when they don't That I know for sure It's ghosts that reside Where the ceiling meets the wall
I like the honest tone in the words. Took the reader to private places and search for the shadows and the ghost of life. You create a place to find answers. Sweet or not. Thank you Nicole for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
i lived in a house where ceiling met the wall...the man who had built the house was a bricklayer...i rented from his widow who was in her 80's....she told me his ghost was in the house...i heard and felt his presence...but it was a calm presence, guessing on my part that he was glad someone was there to look after his Esther.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
That's pretty cool. Also rather eerie. Thanks for sharing!
I like the honest tone in the words. Took the reader to private places and search for the shadows and the ghost of life. You create a place to find answers. Sweet or not. Thank you Nicole for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote