What am I?

What am I?

A Poem by Nicole

Boom clap boom.
I shake the ground with my anger.
I burn the skies with my rage.
I flood cities with my anger.
I blow plagues from the west with my breath.

I protect those who inhabit me, but they do not protect me.
I warm those who inhabit me, but they do not warm me.
I bring rain when water has ceased to flow to those who inhabit me, but they do not thank me.
I am the home to those who inhabit me, but why is it that they make me wish to leave.

What am I?

© 2009 Nicole


Author's Note

Nicole
I was playing that game, you know the game you used to play in elementary(primary) school. you know what i'm talking about, the one where you had to point out all the things.... I Spy

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Um..probably wrong but I'm going to say God. I really did enjoy the poem though good work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


i really like the imagery used to show your anger, i also dk if you were trying to express being taken for granted but that's what i got out of itt

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hey this is good... It differs from everything i have read till today... It means more than one thing and elso "everything" at the same time. The question you ask is one i ask often to myself and if you ask me you narrated it all nicely.. Very good for such a short poem. Congratz ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this but it could really be talking about a couple of things. But one I am thinking of you can't see. Love could be this as well. It's the strongest thing there is. I think of Mother nature as well. This is well written and quite profound really.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 22, 2009
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Nicole
Nicole

Ft. Lauderdale, FL



About
My full name is Nicolette Garmini Elise Ramsingh. I'm a proud person, sure some of the things I do may be bad. Maybe even stupid but, hey. Its my life. :) I love my friends to death. And I'm just .. more..

Writing
Snappin'. Snappin'.

A Poem by Nicole



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