Did I Just Rap..?

Lol, I tried to rap.

There's something deep in your eyes, something cute in your smile, something sexy in your walk.

The way you sway those hips, make lil' Mike wanna jump.

I'm tellin' you girl, I can take you to a whole other world, in another galaxy, and have you home in time for tea.

You see my words will have you in a daze, the only thing you'll see is me and lazy days.

Where everything is slow and gentle.

 

I'll treat you like a goddess, worshipping every part of your anatomy.

Even show you its physiology.

The scent of you tortures me, makes me act beastly.

I'll take you behind  a wall and make you call ---- out my name in sheer ecstasy.

Girl trust me, and I'll set you free.

I'll release you from the bonds of society, so its just you and me.

In this battle for eternity.

Author's Note

My friend Michael asked me to write him a rap. So I attempted to do so..lol. He says he liked it, what do you think?

Reviews

[Global Norskie]

I don't know much about what rap looks like on paper, but from a purely literal point of view, this is really well written! I would dance to it :)

[Jessica]

lmao i like ittttt

[Nicole]

Rofl, I love you Katie.

[Kat]

lmaooooo.
Damn girl, I'll make the beat for this. XD