Escape To The Moon

Escape with me to the moon, and chase the stars.

Follow me to the moon, escape with me from the horors of this world.

Leave with me to create a whole new world, that will grow.

The will grow into a planet of Bliss.

Follow me to the moon, and you will forever be mine.

Follow me to the moon, and I will forever be yours to hold.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love the fantasy here, and how we wish we could actually get there...
as John Denver sang..."follow me up and down, all the way and all around, take my hand and say you'll follow me."
really like this poem a lot...in second line I read it as "horrors"---
j.

[Elanra]

i loved this poem. my real name elmira means moonlight and i am truly obsessed with the moon itself. its a major source of inspiration to me and i just love everything about it ^_^

nicely written and well inspired!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Short and beautiful. Remind of the words of the music men of the past. A fun poem to read.
John(Coyote)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Short, eloquent and very sweet.... very nicely done.

[*~Kristy~*]

I loved the line, "The will grow into a planet of Bliss." its great! And Sideways was right, it's a dazzling poem!

[nostal]

This dazzling!
A wonderful little poem.

[Jessica]

this is so pretty and i love the theme ^___^ i love incorporating nature into poetry. and i like how bliss is capitalized :p