Bright Eyes

Your eyes are beautiful

They sparkle, shimmer, shine

They shine bright like

the moon and the stars

In the sky

They glisten and gleam

Like a stream of cool water

flowing gently down a river

in the bright sunshine

The greyish blue color 

Reminds me of

sweet morning dew

slowly dripping down 

the trees in the 

morning hue

Your eyes are beautiful

They sparkle, shimmer, shine

They shine bright like

the moon and the stars 

late at night

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Admittedly, my weakness for eyes makes this an extra special read. The description is flawless and irresistible.
Thanks for sharing

[Zachary Willis]

Reminded me of someone very special. Very easy to connect with your writing. Great job!

[AdorableDreams]

BEAUTIFUL! This is a perfect poem. I like the metaphors.

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned...my kind of poem...SyberRose

[Invisible]

something to get captured in

[krish]

wht a great poem.....
i liked + loved = enjoyed totally.....
i wanna give u 82/100...this poem sounds really good..........
"BRIGHT EYES , I CAN DO EVERYTHING 4 BLUE EYES,
IN THE WORLD OF STARRING + SUNSHINE,
I'LL GIVE U SO HAPPINESS THROUGH THE SKY,
"BRIGHT EYES, LOOKING VERY NICE,
UR'S HEART IS ALIKE A COLD-ICE,
IN WHICH I WANNA BE FLY,
BRIGHT EYES, BRIGHT EYES ANYTHING ..4 ....BLUE-EYES.....BLUE-EYES........"

[Antonio Valentino]

nothing like a sincere innocent penning of fondness..

thanks for the breath of crisp air

:)

[Priscilla Sayers]

A very sweet poem. Full of love. I send my love to you dear poet....

[Eagle Cruagh]

Beautiful .
You tagged this
Bright Eyes.
----- John