Broken Heart

I'm so sad to think

your with someone else

My heart is crushed

and about to melt

I knew I felt 

someone above me

Even though all i really wanted

was for you to love me

she's young and pretty

with a fresh heart

I should have known

from the start

that you would like her

more than an old Broken Heart

but my love for you 

is ten thousand times stronger

Hopefully... someday... you will realize 

that you love me

and love me much much longer

Reviews

[The Girl That Let You G..]

I love the way you have described yourself. It was a sad poem, very good write

[MoriartyMesa]

Silent cries
Silent eyes,
silent tears,





Silence from this reviewer because this was very good.

[Megan]

I like the referrence to yourself as "an old Broken Heart" here. It gives insight to past pain compared with the desire people often have to meet someone new and fresh. But there is treasure to be found in an "old Broken Heart", one of the treasures an understanding of pain.