Someday

I really like this guy

I don't know why?

It makes me laugh

So hard I cry

He makes me feel really good

Deep down inside

He's cute and Funny

Sweet like Honey

He makes my world 

Bright and sunny

Pretty blue eyes 

THat match the sky

He's heaven to touch

I don't know why

I lay in Bed

Daydreaming of him

Something in my heart tells me

I could fall in love with him

Someday

I'll wait and see

How much this guy really means to me

Reviews

[Ees]

I like the optimism of the title.
I like the simplistic truthful way in which you write. like it is just there for the reader to take. That's a nice change of pace when reading poetry on this site.


and then, goddamn, I hope we didn't both just meet the same dude, because man oh man, that could totally describe this one that I have been seeing and exactly how I feel about him... haha. He's sweet as can be, too and has blue eyes actually... and thinking of him makes me feel so good and looking at his face makes me feel even better and I can't find what I don't like about him... but I need to wait and see because, well because that is what needs to be done.

hahah,
I got distracted sorry, your poem got me thinking, which is of course the mark of a good poem.

great job!

[Suditi]

Wow!
This strikes a chord.
Lovely poem. :)

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow i freakin love this amazing write! mind checking out some of my work? thanks

[A POET WITH A MUSE]

YOU HAVE SUCH AMAZING RAW TALENT 8D
I AM BITING MY NAILS JUST THINKING ABOUT THE NEXT POEM YOU WRITE
'HOPEFULLY' (CROSSING FINGERS) 8D
YOU ARE MY FAV POET HERE ON THIS SITE x

[Wolfwind]

Time reveals all in time. Waiting is indeed the name of the game and we humans have mastered the art of it. A great poem strolling down the road of your hopes and dreams. Nice ink!

Aaron