Longing for His Love

Longing for His Love

A Poem by GiveMeLove

I love him
He has my heart
I think about him 
constantly
When were apart
He fuels my heart
Now its flamed
Burning fire
Hopeful desire
I long for his love
constantly
It drives me crazy
Haunting me
He's in my dreams
Taunting me
My monkey mind is 
Constantly
Thinking about him 
Wronging me
I want his love
I want his touch
I want him soo bad
It's F*****g driving me Mad!

© 2012 GiveMeLove


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Wow deep and powerful,
I really LOVED the ending,
I can feel it...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Another unique but also honest poem, it has an astoundingly individual quality to it.
You write poetry that I can read over and over again.
The rhyme is great and so the poem flows really well.
You cannot honestly put into words how good the poem is because it is from the heart. Poetry isn't poetry without emotion to back it and you have it in bucket loads. 8D x
A great read. On to the next one

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on January 29, 2012
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