My Soul

Im soo depressed

And I know why,

I sit and wish         

I could f*****g cry,  ;(

I need your love

I don't know why,

Maybe i'm sick

I might just die,

If you don't try

To ease my pain,

I'll cry and cry

Over and over again,

I want you back!

I want you here!

Where did you go?

You have so much fear,

Come back to me

I need you here,

Your beautiful!!!

I want you dear,

Give me your heart

Let it go,

I need you to see...

You are my soul!!!

Reviews

[A POET WITH A MUSE]

This is the best poem I have read on this site, even though I have only been part of it for a very short time and read only a small amount of poems I read them over a couple of times and this one speaks to me 8D
CRITIQUE - WOW, it flows incredibly, it rhymes when it needs to and it's so magnificently heartfelt.
It isn't too long and it carries an acute / sharp and strong message.
You have unbelievable talent my dear 8D. I CANNOT wait to read more. x

[Eagle Cruagh]

This has heartfelt appeal.
It is clear, concise, raw and
honest.
It is classic in design and style.
Bravo, you score large.
--- John