she�s not an angel

I don't like giving descriptions, I let the pics I add do the talking:)

 

 

she will arrive in a moment
this is the moment I have been
waiting for for an eternity
I still cannot believe that
she will come at my place
that's what she told
me an hour ago, smiling

 

and I already put fresh
flowers on the table
to create some atmosphere
this time it's not a lie,
she will come at my
place tonight, she won't go
to the other guy.

 

she's always in my mind
she's like an obsession that
inflames my senses and fantasy
and I imagine to have her here
and I imagine to seize her
in my arms, to seize
her like this.

 

she's the only one in my mind
she's like a fire on my skin
that I cannot wash
and in my dreaming eyes
I see her like an angel
she, who is actually not an angel.

 

midnight has passed and I
have already extinguished all
the stars on the ceiling
I'm going to bed and I think again
that she will come to my place
that's what she told me
a day a long time ago.

 

she's the only one in my mind.........my angel, why did you desert me?

 

Nico S. Poetry.

Author's Note

this is one of my latest writes......hope you enjoy the incoparation of the pictures as they pertain to the poem!!!

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I like these lines especially as there is great urgency in them and the fantasy seems utterly alive here...

and I imagine to have her here
and I imagine to seize her
in my arms, to seize
her like this.

And the notion of a woman being a fantasy angel, but also not an angel combines the two way men often look at women. Of course the ideal is to have both types of woman in one!

[Sean M. Addams]

great imagery and flow in this piece filled with lots of emotion thanks for sharing this.

[Steffi]

This piece is full of emotions and feelings.
And the idea that you use pictures to convey the descriptions is creative. :D

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

the piece is sad and full of emotion - nicely done...

i found one possible error -- in the line 'she will come at my' i think the 'at' should be a 'to'

[E. M. Murren]

This is a really nice blend of hope and despair. Nice story poetically told. Really nice.

[Robert Luna]

I love to find pictures and write based o what they make me feel and what I see from them. I enjoyed the way you told a story here and described it in a way that I could see and feel the surroundings with such a clarity. The thoughts that carried so wonderfully throughout the whole piece. I think you write with heart which is refreshing to see and read.


Well DOne!!!!!!

[The Lovely Sound Of Cra..]

Love your use of pictures in the beginning. A poem about the hope of love gone wrong... *sighs* So sad.

You're very poetic and your vivid descriptions about how you want to hold this girl and how she means so much to you is just awesome. It builds up so much passion and romantic flare, only to drop a brick of pain and sadness on you at the end. You know how to make us feel heart ache really well! (That's a compliment!)

You got some serious talent Nico. Thanks for sharing.

[Marie]

I love the pics, you picked quiet well. I don't like descriptions either, I just usually leave it blank. LOL. Excellent piece. Thanks for sending it my way.

[Sally Edwards]

Ecellent imagery Nico, she is obviously very prominent in your thoughts, I like how you compare her to an angel, I thought only women suffered such let downs, beautiful and sad all in one.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

beautifully written, great imagery and flow. wonderful write.


Great Write,
Rayne

[Carole]

This gal must be very special indeed to have your constant thought and to have captured your heart as she obviously has. Very intriguing write, Nico!