You will Leave

 

Oh, no! Here is that moment
I feared for a long time, you know
I already know
what it is you are going to tell me,
that it's the end of us.

I know that with him
you feel more free
to accept his love;
to count on him more

What a shock to me,
I who gave you everything inside of me
As you go you are taking my heart with you

One love forever
lasts only an instant
There are so many memories
that vanish with you
Only that dream remains,
the story of lovers,
but in the end you will leave me.

This city that I think of myself as being
is deserted of tears
I feel my heart drowning inside of me
while you are with him.

They say that you don't die from love;
You don't loose anything;
But now I feel that fire dying within me

I also know I should be happy for you
But I lie, because
I wish you to stay here with me

But, in the end
you will leave
you will leave, leave in pain
you will leave
and be far from me.

Nico S.
 

Reviews

[TamerQtaish]

beautiful poem, sweet words spoken with pain, its as almost you lost someone!
Well if thats the case, its her lost bro

I would had done a few things in another way, but honestly I am not sure if it would had came out as beautiful as this... a solute you

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

[George Love]

Well done.

[E. M. Murren]

This is a heartbreaking piece... beautifully written. Really fine work. Many cheers.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

this is something that all of us have expierenced... on one side of the story or the other... great piece of writing - i agree with TamerQtaish - it is a beautiful poem... emotion runs through it - the pain and sadness can be felt in the words.

[Marie]

Like the poem and the pic fits really well too.