emotion has no voice

I can't talk about love
emotion has no voice
and I'm a bit breathless
if you are there, there's too much light

my soul expands itself
like music in Summer
and then the passion gets me
and it swichtes me on with your kisses

I'll be sincere with you
I'll remain what I am
never dishonest, I swear it
but if you are unfaithful,
I won't forgive
 
I'll always be your friend
even jealous, as you know

I know I say contradictions
but you are precious to me
in my arms you will sleep
peace...fully
and this is important you know
to feel entirely ourselves

you'll give me another life
that which I don't know of
my mate you will be
till I know you'll be wanting to

two different temperaments
burn easily
but divided we are lost
we almost feel we are nothing

the two of us are linked inside
by a love that gives us
the deep belief
that no-one will break us down

then we'll live on
only in sincerity
of love and trust
and then it will be what it is
a love drived by emotion.

Nico S.

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful sentiments - what a feeling to be bonded to someone so completely - well expressed. The only thing I might change is in the last sentence I might use the word 'driven' rather than drived. Thank you for sharing. Nice work.
Light,
Siddartha

[E. M. Murren]

Really well said. You offer your vision of your relationship gracefully. I have been with my husband for 27 years now... that feeling of being entirely ourselves defines a solid relationship. Fabulous write.

[TamerQtaish]

flows beautifully, I can see you put alot of your heart into it, and I respect that!
Great job my friend... Keep them rolling ;)
All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

a beautiful piece of writing... emotional - great flow... nicely done