emotion has no voice

I can't talk about love
emotion has no voice
and I'm a bit breathless
if you are there, there's too much light

my soul expands itself
like music in Summer
and then the passion gets me
and it swichtes me on with your kisses

I'll be sincere with you
I'll remain what I am
never dishonest, I swear it
but if you are unfaithful,
I won't forgive
 
I'll always be your friend
even jealous, as you know

I know I say contradictions
but you are precious to me
in my arms you will sleep
peace...fully
and this is important you know
to feel entirely ourselves

you'll give me another life
that which I don't know of
my mate you will be
till I know you'll be wanting to

two different temperaments
burn easily
but divided we are lost
we almost feel we are nothing

the two of us are linked inside
by a love that gives us
the deep belief
that no-one will break us down

then we'll live on
only in sincerity
of love and trust
and then it will be what it is
a love drived by emotion.

Nico S.

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful sentiments - what a feeling to be bonded to someone so completely - well expressed. The only thing I might change is in the last sentence I might use the word 'driven' rather than drived. Thank you for sharing. Nice work.
Light,
Siddartha

[Nik Dendera]

I love the honesty of this! It bites at the reader, dragging them down into it.
Really well written and full of great images. Perfectly worded: "but divided we are lost
we almost feel we are nothing the two of us are linked inside by a love that gives us the deep belief
that no-one will break us down" Wonderful!
Excellent write!

[Ken Simm.]

Smooth and so right. It is what happens, everytime.

[Sean M. Addams]

very nicely done... great flow and imagery make this a really great piece.

[Marie]

Nice. All true. Thanks for sharing.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

wonderfully expressed piece. filled with emotion. enjoyed this.


Great Write.

[Karen Raquepo]

Expressive poem. So, it's an emotion or the love for each other, that the relationship survives till the end.

[JC Fox]

I simply adored this poem, it was very sincere and even though it has a sinister message this poem is still kind of sweet.

[George Love]

A very good emotional work. Well said

[justjenn_2u]

Very open and expressive in this poem! You have the most important elements of a relationship down - honesty and faithfulness! The best basis for love!