emotion has no voice

I can't talk about love
emotion has no voice
and I'm a bit breathless
if you are there, there's too much light

my soul expands itself
like music in Summer
and then the passion gets me
and it swichtes me on with your kisses

I'll be sincere with you
I'll remain what I am
never dishonest, I swear it
but if you are unfaithful,
I won't forgive
 
I'll always be your friend
even jealous, as you know

I know I say contradictions
but you are precious to me
in my arms you will sleep
peace...fully
and this is important you know
to feel entirely ourselves

you'll give me another life
that which I don't know of
my mate you will be
till I know you'll be wanting to

two different temperaments
burn easily
but divided we are lost
we almost feel we are nothing

the two of us are linked inside
by a love that gives us
the deep belief
that no-one will break us down

then we'll live on
only in sincerity
of love and trust
and then it will be what it is
a love drived by emotion.

Nico S.

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful sentiments - what a feeling to be bonded to someone so completely - well expressed. The only thing I might change is in the last sentence I might use the word 'driven' rather than drived. Thank you for sharing. Nice work.
Light,
Siddartha

[Jasmina Amethyst Pendra..]

This is a very lovely poem. I enjoyed it very much. There is nothing like a love that conquers all, that seems to the core of one's soul. WOW. This is fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing it with me.

~Liv

[Angel Bird]

Wonderful poem. Very strong and powerful, one feels the emotions and feelings physically almost.

Easy read by its nice flow. Great job!

[Brette Medb]

Beautiful words. A love that is true and deep down to the core of one's soul. Linked complete and whole through the other person. There are few loves like this that are found, shared and cherished.

Brette

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Such the romantic heart beats within you...great write!

[Steffi]

Beautiful.
I loved the flow it carried me along through the peace instead of forcing myself to read each line.
The imagery was really well done, you painted the picture well for the reader.

[The Lovely Sound Of Cra..]

I can relate to this because I felt like this with some of my ex-relationships. We broke up and everything, but I was still good friends with them because I really cared for them and vice versa. Even though things didn't work out, I still have love for them.

"I'll always be your friend
even jealous, as you know
I know I say contradictions
but you are precious to me
in my arms you will sleep
peace...fully
and this is important you know
to feel entirely ourselves"

Powerful and very touching poetry. You write some very deep stuff and convey it beautifully.
Keep doing your thing. Props to you.

[Robert Luna]

I really liked this and thought it was very creative. You have pushed the lines of normality and knocked the dust off the formal style with this. I love to see a writer work within their own ideas of what is abd should be and not fall victim to trying to force the flow of thoughts into something that has no life of its own. You have written something different and wonderful here.

Great Job!!!!!

[Joseph - Michael]

You just gave out the honest and raw tastes of how love can be sometimes. Very well written

So, it's all great here...

[R J Askew]

There is an intensity about this...love but not unconditional love. And never step out of line! Strong stuff.

[poddar kushal]

a streight forward story in an honest voice i like it."burn easily
but divided we are lost"...