One more day

I hope you like it. It is the first time for me to share a poem, so I’d be glad if you could give me some advice.

Try, one more day.
Stay, one more day,
Be you, one more day,
Make it through one more day.

Because after this day, there comes another.
Different,
New,
Better or worse.

But even though, It might get worse and worse,
Even though, you don’t see a reason,
It is worth to try,
Another day.

Because if you give up,
You will never know,
If it gets better,
or worse.

After one more day,
You can decide,
If it was worth it
Or not.

Reviews

[Lavi]

I really like how you expressed this although the only thing that I have to say that conflicts with the message you are sending are that sometimes it is (unfortunately) not as simple as whether not the next day is worth it; for better or worst. In the case of feeling trapped, time loses meaning, and you feel lost. Sometimes giving up is the best thing people can do for themselves so that they can choose their battles more wisely in another place. What's that saying: "Sometimes you have to lose a battle to win a war"? That pretty much applies here.

Regardless I enjoyed reading this and the perspective you've given. Good work :)