Good dreams bad things

A weird dream based poem that was strange and scary fun and crazy all at the same time.

I plug myself in, 
The needle enters,
Luscious venom
Seeping into my veins,
We stand huddled in the dark room,
Squalid and ruined,
Paint lined our bodies,
Glowing bright in the dark,
The naked skin just objects,
Bought sold and rented,
Pupils wide and eyes black with night,
then the door opens and music seeps in,
Mutters and groans escape broken lips,
One is taken,
The drug trips,
I'm pulled out, my skin radiating the electric blue,
The paint chosen for me,
It goes with my eyes,
The buyer looks me up and down,
I don't mind my nakedness,
I stand tall and look him in his face,
Defiance,
This only makes him smirk,
And say with whispering hue,
"What a boy,"
"Electric blue."

Reviews

[sentimental~ galore]

So dark and lustful, it sounded like an acid trip although i've never done acid but I imagine this description kind of took me there. Dreamy in a strange mystique way.

[Anna]

Well written in a way that is serious, funny, and imaginative all in one. It's hard to imagine such a thing, but you managed to do it (:

[Alex]

Thank you, found reading it myself a bit wierd but as long as it is liked than thats all that matters :)

[Pratik]

Dark and funny... that is something so difficult to put together.. but you did it just right... Well done :)

[Alex]

Thanks, glad you liked it :)

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Great work,Alex. I love the line " Mutters and groan's escape broken lips". Very descriptive.

[Alex]

Thank you :)

[eglantine]

repo, the gentic opera! that's what it is ilolol

[eglantine]

this really kind of reminded me of that musical... rock opera? idk, something like taht lol, but i reccomend you watch it (it's on netflix if you have that! :D )

[Alex]

Cheers will defo check it out, thank you :)