Neverland

Poem about how I never want to grow up coz really it kinda sucks so stopping at eighteen would be cool coz you can still do all the fun stuf ;D

 

Never,

Never,

Yes is easier than no,

yet to there we all must go,

to never age or worry at all,

we stay as children and cannot fall,

to never fear or feel pain,

to save precious tears for that gorgeous rain,

we will be lost,

and it is there we shall be found,

youth and freedom hath no cost,

our innocence and age make little sound,

we never age or go,

the immortal children,

who can say no.

Author's Note

Please comment and I hope you enjoyed it :)

Reviews

[Jordan Chisam]

let me stay forever in this dream... and take me away to neverland
neverland has been a dream of mine since i was 6 or something haha...
this truly spoke to me...
i love it

Jordan.

[LouisianaBird]

This was simple,sweet, and thoughtful. I enjoyed it! I want a speedy ticket to Neverland please! :D

[Alex]

Glad you liked it :D

[Acropolix]

Makes me think of the movie 'In time'. Where no one ages after reaching the age of 25. Nice work!

[Alex]

Power to the youth, yes, loved it.
You young man, have already a great
Philosophers mind... keep on penning.

E.L.

[Alex]

Oh, methinks 'tis a shame no one else agrees :P Thank you so much, will definitely keep writing my little silly thoughts :D