This is refreshing and outstanding in it's own right. Short, but deep like a black hole. You chose every single word perfectly, drowning us with well-worded imagery. Who needs rhymes when you have such pace. Well done, favorited too !
I'm not the best person to review poems, but I like this one. It's short, but it describes it perfectly. Or at least it's the same as how I would describe it. Nice job. :)