Don't hate me for me

Ahh these people annoy me

You call me fat,
You call me ugly,
But really I think your fugly.
You call me names,
You think your cool,
But everyone thinks your a damn fool.
Don't call me names,
Don't stab my back,
'Cause I'm a psycho and I'll make you whack.
Get a life,
And get out of my mine,
'Cause right now  it's my time to shine.
Get on my level,
And off the floor,
Oh wait you can't 'cause your a stupid w***e.
Don't judge me,
'Cause of what you've seen,
Check your hands they aren't so clean.

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

There's some great lines in this, the mood is empowering! I think Theresa expressed quite well my feelings on it all. Keep writing!

[Theresa]

I really enjoyed this piece. You express yourself well and your opinion and feelings most certainly come across. The only thing I have to say is that you start off sounding hurt about the names you've been called and then you retaliate the same way. Trust me your not alone, I've done that a million times over, but I've learned sometimes its better to take the high road and forget about the ones that aren't worth your time. However you did get a very well written, self expressing poem out of it and it was quite enjoyable. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.