Bad Man

Looking at the view, trying to understand,
"Am I a bad man? Or just mean well?",
every thing I do turns into ashes,

I've played with her feelings like I didn't care,
so today I'm trying to understand,
"Am I a bad man? Or just mean well?"

Whatever I do I should not give up the hope,
she still loves me but she wants to grow up

No one ever felt my pain,
They only saw me behind this clown mask laughing in the rain.
Partying wasn't the answer,

I need to get her back in my life,
so I can't feel the wound of that knife...
I guess I paid the price

"Am I a bad man? Or just mean well?"

Author's Note

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

It says enough to a reader. Very powerful write. Your passion towards your work's powerful. You;ve a great knowledge of it. I'm sure it's again came from someone's real life. Nice flow of ink. I'd like to look forward your some more stuffs.

[Nick.B]

Thanks I appreciate it

[Wórdsmíth]

well, can't guess even now "am i a bad one or just mean well..lol", that's an amazin' one that i read out n felt it deeply man. what a beautiful piece. SO, who the man your are
bad or just mean well....lol ?
well written

[Nick.B]

Thank you, I appreciate it

[char]

The fight for love ensues. I like this, it leaves room for the reader to wonder what he did and how he'll win her back. Nice job! :)

[Nick.B]

Thanks glad you like it

[Stormie Sky]

This is really good, it says a lot about fighting for love.

[Nick.B]

Thanks, glad you like it

[Stormie Sky]

your welcome

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

"Honest expression" Love the spirit for fighting for love.

[Nick.B]

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it

[Muse]

not bad...just immature maybe, but we've all had those moments.

[Nick.B]

Thanks for taking the time to read this, I appreciate it

[Acer]

Dominant, just powerful

[Nick.B]

Thank you

[hardik]

Simply marvelous

[Nick.B]

Thanks

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

I've played with her feelings like I didn't care,
so today I'm trying to understand,
"Am I a bad man? Or just mean well?"


poured salt on an open wound.... great and sentimental

And please tell me that those are your drums?
Will be glad to meet another drummer here

[Nick.B]

Thanks, this will be kind of a let down, I play guitar, sometimes drums when I'm in the mood..

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

I see!
good luck :)

[PadfootBlack]

I've felt like this recently. This is well-worded and makes me go back to wonder myself. Nice write.

[Nick.B]

Thank you, I appreciate it