A new search for love

Together we can break this madness,
When I see you, a part of me starts to tremble,
and my soul is set on fire,

I've walked the highway of broken heroes,
where no love was found,
only misery and sadness,
but when I saw your face,
the whole world turned upside down,

My cold heart started to melt away,
my mind was blocked with the color red,
and my eyes only focused on your face,

"Maybe I could be saved?
finding love again could be the way?
For us to raise our heads in this world today,
and say "Hey! We found love", in a place so far away.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

A new search for love's a lovely topic to work on. I liked this bcoz, everyday starts with a light and everyone seems to probe love to live his/her life without pain or sorrow. Love's one and love always spread love not pain or hurt...But sometimes it hurts too, depends on us how we deal with that.
Very nice write. Last stanza's powerful, filled with your humanity drops.
Nice flow once again!

[Nick.B]

Thanks for your wonderful words, I appreciate it

[Wórdsmíth]

That's great to read, well written.

[Nick.B]

Thanks...I appreciate it

[Storm K.]

I really think this poem is nice, sweet and very uplifting. The end slightly reminds me of "We Found Love" by Rihanna but not in a bad way, just with the phrasing of the last sentence. Nice write :)

[Nick.B]

Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

A nice one...:)

[Nick.B]

Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Rogue]

This is lovely. A scarred soul filled with hope..
Very good write. :)

[Nick.B]

Thank you

[Acer]

Nice description. well written, beautiful. I Loved it.

[Nick.B]

Thank you, glad you like it

[BryanaBear]

Great Use of description, Love it! :)

[Nick.B]

Thank you, glad you like it

[Be myself!]

I love it. The emotions are well played. In my mind I am hearing the song "We found love in a hopeless place". lol

[Nick.B]

Thank you, glad you like it :D

[Be myself!]

Your welcome! :)