Forbidden fruit

Feeling the forbidden fruit
made me look so desperate,
for more
tasting her lips felt like heaven was down here
i have felt her fear
her love
and her passion
that fruit made all this reaction....

Reviews

[Quill~]

I like!! Very nice. ;)

Sexy "and" romantic.

[Nick.B]

Thank glad you like it

[emmajoy]

Early morning read for me: almost too much but, have certainly been woken up by your very seductive words!

[Nick.B]

Thank you glad you like it

[Janice Fronek(red.panda..]

oh wow, so many meanings in such a small poem :D i love it

[Nick.B]

Thank you, glad you like it :D