Black

I wrote this poem when I was 14 with the intensions of turning it into a song. Now, 24 years later, it has been turned into a song with the help of a dear musician friend of mine who wasn't even born at the time when it was originally written...

Reviews

[Kristen]

This drew me in.

[Legion]

I like this. Not bad for 14. Wouldn't mind hearing the music to it sometime. Kudos.

[Michael Lasalle]

Nicholetta,
i find the concept behind
this fascinating, turning
your older poem, which itself
is powerful, shadowed emotions
expressed from the heart,
into a song, thats brilliant,
would love to hear it, peace, mike