When I Come Home

When I Come Home

A Poem by NibbleLove
"

How I feel when I come home from school.

"
.....but most of the time I come home and I immediately feel like leaving. 
And it sucks.
I hope my mom is happy today.

© 2013 NibbleLove


Author's Note

NibbleLove
This is actually the ending of a journal entry I wrote at school one day :)

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Aww. I am so sorry. From this i get that your home isn't a place you look forward to be at. Sweet of you to hope that for your mommy. I get that she too feels the same way as you about home ( that's why you hope she is happy?). I hope from my heart that everything gets better for you both.

Posted 11 Years Ago


very beautiful n lovable piece of writing, i even didn't ever read such a piece here from anyone. you know what you made it from you heart because you knew the worth of your Mom's feeling's, you love your Mom much, it floats on your words n shows from your this piece of writing.
nicely penned...it's not a poem.......it's a nice thought after off the school about Mommy.
great job.
have this 100/100 :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


NibbleLove

11 Years Ago

thank you! :)
aw thats too bad that home doesn't feel inviting. it will get better!

Posted 11 Years Ago


NibbleLove

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

welcome!

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