Threaten to..

Colors!

My heavy heart

Threatens to fall

Out of my chest

 

My gurgling stomach

Threatens to erupt

inside my body cavity

 

My trembling fingers

Threaten to separate

From my untried palms

 

My teary eyes

Threaten to flow

With escape

 

All because

You stand here

In front of me

 

Author's Note

I wanted to play with colors.

Reviews

[Jessie Sianodel]

Oooh colors!!!! lol, I love colors! I really like this because it's so many emotions wrapped into one feeling. How can anyone experience it all at once? My favorite part is;

My teary eyes
Threaten to flow
With Escape

Probably because it's blue...lol great poem though!

[Iota]

Wow when someone has this affect on another it is some strong emotions involved. Do people realize they can have this affect on someone? and if so how do they use this power they have? Interesting write.

[Crowley]

I love it when you play with colors. Really cool poem about something so simple but so nerve racking. Nice build up and great colors.