Dark

Dark

A Poem by Nianque

Hiding in the dark

Unseeing

Not wanting to be seen

Shadows thrive in the places

I’ve started to dwell

Hiding, loathing light

 

If I am here by choice or not

Doesn’t matter

All I can say is that I am here

Dwelling in places that

Have seen better days

 

© 2010 Nianque


Author's Note

Nianque
Thank you in advance.

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You know one never has to hide in the dark for the dark hides all. Maybe in the dark we feel safe, because no one can see us, no one knows us, but the good thing is in time the light always finds us and in that we can escape the dark cage that once held us. I hope your days get better again, you deserve a break from the darkness.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i feel you've given yourself to me...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That darkness can be suffocating, always good to remember there is always light in darkness!
This is a beautifully moving poem love
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ohhhh myyyy preecciousssss....indeed, whether physically in the dark or mentally, a cruel but sometimes necessary place to be. I like.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know one never has to hide in the dark for the dark hides all. Maybe in the dark we feel safe, because no one can see us, no one knows us, but the good thing is in time the light always finds us and in that we can escape the dark cage that once held us. I hope your days get better again, you deserve a break from the darkness.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 1, 2010
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Nianque
Nianque

Somewhere or over there, , GA



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