An Angel Among Us

Have you ever looked at someone and thought my God you are the most beautiful thing that I have ever seen. You just want to take a mental snapshot and store it away in your memory.

 

       An Angel Among us.

  

Here she came from up above, a mysterious source of beauty and light.  

A golden light is what surrounds her,

with blue eyes she looks into mine and sees into my heart and soul. 

Hair long and flowing reminiscent of a stream, lips as red as a delicate rose.

Her voice in a sweet melody, a melody that remains in your memory even in difficult times.

Dear sweet angel cover me with your soft, white wings and protect me from harm, for tonight there’s nothing I want more than to bask in your heavenly glow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[.Bunnie.]

This poem was absolutely beautiful! Your imagery is totally on the spot, and I love how you compared certain parts of the angel to something pleasant and pleasing out of life.

With that said, my only suggestion would be to edit the formatting of this. For example:

"Here she came from up above, a mysterious source of beauty and light.
A golden light is what surrounds her, with blue eyes she looks into mine and sees into my heart and soul."

To:

"Here she came from up above
A mysterious source of beauty and light.
A golden light is what surrounds her
With blue eyes she looks into mine
And sees into my heart and soul. "


Also, on the very last line, the word 'more' is left out:

"for tonight there's nothing I want (more) than to bask in your heavenly glow."

Other than that, fantastic job!! :) I really liked it.

Thanks for the add!!

[Tayler]

Oh, wow I love this! It's gorgeous. I could see the angel you described so fantastically. A wonderful write :)

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a beautifully flowing, lifting write that just soothes the soul. So filled with peace. Thank you so much for sharing!

[*~Kristy~*]

I pictured her very vividly too. It reminds me of the Vampire Diaries(book series) book five. This was a perfect description of her.
You can just picture the purity and the beauty. The brilliant light. You can picture it all. This is very nicely written.

[Undying Glory]

great description. you can picture her very vividly...nice